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Memory Box: The Poet's Quest

I've written poetry almost as long as I've been capable of holding a pen. For this I credit my fantastic second-grade English teacher, Mrs. Johnnie Stahl, who taught us poetry fundamentals and had us write poems in her class.


My earliest poems were all metered and rhyming, typically sticking primarily to tetrameter with A-A-B-B rhyme scheme.


By the time I was in high school, I had begun experimenting with free verse, which I felt offered me more options for expression. In today's Memory Box, I'll share some of those early efforts.



Poetry Book (Click to enlarge)

A close-up of the poem "The Writer's Quest"

(Faster-loading version)


I was an avid reader of poetry, and among my favorite poets at the time were Emily Dickinson and Rod McKuen, in part because I'd seen him read at Chautauqua, New York, on a family vacation. I loved Emily for her playfulness and her creative use of language, and I loved Rod for his thoughtfulness and simplicity. In my poems, I tried to borrow elements from both: Rod's deep thoughts and short lines; Emily's use of metaphor and penchant for hidden meanings.


Some of my poems jumped full-fledged from my brain, based on something I'd seen or experienced, but others started by sitting down with a thesaurus and making a list of words which I felt were relevant to the poem. I wrote primarily for myself, not worrying about making it accessible to a wider audience. Sometimes even I didn't truly understand it, because I often prized experimentation over comprehension.


I transferred my finished poems carefully in colored ink into a clothbound blank book, a habit I would continue throughout college. While I was working towards my MFA in poetry, however, I discontinued the practice, because every time I felt I had a final version of a poem, I would find a new line break or feel the need to refine a turn of phrase. Today, I view my poems as open-ended, like Walt Whitman, making revisions to them over time. A good poem is never finished.


One of my more successful poems from this volume combined a series of metaphors, inspired by looking at an icicle hanging from a roof. As you can see, I was prone to sentimentality and flowery language.



Daydream seed


Cold dripping glitter sword
reflects light
into my eyes
from outside a winter window


Hangs impossibly
at a rakish angle
speaking of love and beauty
and nature's courage


Drips onto a glistening
bed of fairy dust,
white gold in the
afternoon sun


Resembles a garden hose
or an elbow
overflowing with
freezing water


An elf smile
hung from a roof,
clearest thoughts
suspended above winter



In another poem, I attempted to create a meditative feel, based on observations of the natural world. I also experimented with unusual diction as I tried to capture how things looked from my perspective. As with many of my early poems, it could have benefited from some trimming, to focus on the stronger moments.



Awareness


Afternoon sunshine
has alight in my hair;
on bed of dry grass
I linger,
held by sun warmth.


I close eyes,
become aware
of each small noise
     hum of cars in faraway
     jingle of dog collar
     pounding of bridge workers
With sun on shoulders
I am complete body
at one with senses.


Wet dog nose
wake me from hypnosis
did I disturb your trance, ask
brother.
Eyes flash open,
blue-tint world emerge:
cat executing ballet positions
snow leftovers painted indigo.


Head in hedge
I glance up tree:
    birds fly sideways.


This side of street
    is spring,
other side winter.


I am inside out-looking:
gold hairs glint
on exposed ankles
orange cat fur
on blue gloves.


Breeze stir me
mrrow, cat flee
sun fall asleep,
drop head on horizon.
Whisper time arrive.



Next, I'll share an example of one of my so-called "thesaurus poems." In this one, I also made use of humor (complete with unnecessary punch line). It's important to note in this poem, in case it's not obvious, that I envisioned myself as the tempted passerby. Nowadays, I steer clear of personification of objects, which I find cloying. Then again, in this poem, I suppose that's all right.



Dieter's Nightmare


Diabolically sweet candies,
lying so innocently
in a confectioner's window
Glistening with sugary coatings,
they utter
a mute summons,
their syrupy bodies
modestly concealed
under a red ribbon


A passerby pauses
to glance at the candies,
which lie in their boxes
and hum honeyed music
The pedestrian places
a fleshy hand
on the glass, as if
to pull the candies
through the window


A sinister array
of bonbons and sweets
has been arranged
by a surprisingly trim
and dexterous employee
Now a spectrum of
      sugarplums
      taffy
      caramels
      fudge
   and lollipops
rests on the luxuriant silk
of the window display

Pudgy face
presses against
the window
Beads of sweat
appear on a pale brow,
blubbery arms
quiver with restraint


Creamy toffees
tangy gumballs
cool-green mints
smile back


With a desperate effort
the tempted one
wrenches away
from the window,
pushes away from
the gleaming glass
With a longing look
at a butterscotch nougat
the pedestrian departs


Sucrose
glucose
dextrose
fructose
lactose
settle back their
heads and
hum farewell


The glass
faintly glimmers,
already smeared
with human oil
from many passersby

Guilty of an
accursed crime;
     to display
     candy
     in public



Some of my poems were inherently political, with favorite topics being peace, love, and understanding, as well as a critique of consumer culture. See if you can tell the subject of this next poem, which mimics the meter of "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star," although with willfully unusual line breaks. I've included a link that will explain the more obscure reference in this exercise in absurdity.



Memorandum


Flicker flicker
mindless box
show us parody's
not lost
intergrain our
thoughts
with plots
red and itchy
flicker shocks


Laughter packaged
clever bare
not a space
to sup some air
When our blue inked
thoughts are gone
sing to sleep
our country's song


Sticky sticky
candy box
fluff our children
till they're glossed
show us how to
stop
our spots
cleaning clothing
with Clorox


Saving kingdom
that portends
snakes that walk
on their tail ends
Portmanteau word
of our thoughts
flicker flicker
foreign box



Since I was, after all, a teenager, some of the poems were filled with angst. I assure you, this poem is all about the drama and is not based on reality. Later, for a comedy show on college radio, I created an angst-ridden poet named Berlin St. Croix, a.k.a. Black Death, who wrote very similar poems (although hers were, of course, funnier).



The Tryst


Despair chilled me
with its icy breath
and ran its cold fingers
down my back
I clung to it
as its voice scratched
the secrets of hopelessness;
the imperfect words
that fed my poverty


It dragged me down
on my lumpy mattress
and fanned my smoky fears
with a paper of disillusion,
all the while chiding me
for my psychotic confidence


Then, as the morning
ripped through the blackness,
Despair creaked away
over barely shadowed floor
Almost imperceptibly
it paused in the doorway;


blew a stale kiss
and assured me
it would return once more.



The poem that ends this particular volume could serve as my ars poetica, in those days. In other words, this was how I viewed poetry as a teenager, and what I wanted my poetry to do. Incidentally, rereading it today, I'd lose the last two stanzas.



The Writer's Quest


Longing to create,
not just transform,
to use words
that have not been invented,
paint colors
that do not exist


To change, metamorphosize
           meanings
                   shades
        colors
                             abstractions
                       thoughts
                                 ideas
       textures


Searching for freedom,
for words
that leap your mind,
tumble space,
blaze emotions
in fiery streaks
an ecstasy high


For exploding colors,
as audible as memory,
that shout mountains,
swallow time,
echo sensation
across valleys
and wide ocean


To express all this
without ever
leaving my mind



The poems that I've shared today represent some of the most accessible from this volume. Some were so deliberately obscure that I'm not sure I even understood them while I was writing them. While these poems all remained unpublished, I recycled some of my favorite lines into later poems, and one such recycled line serves as the title for my current manuscript.


Although they're not publishable as anything other than juvenilia, these poems will remain precious to me: part of my evolution as a poet, writer and thinker.


Moral:

As much as you might change over the years, your key personality remains the same.



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