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A Sonnet for KFP

This is my entry in the Shakespearean sonnet contest being offered by Associated Content by Yahoo!

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/7994081/love_grows.html?cat=42

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msstacy13
Apr. 22nd, 2011 11:21 pm (UTC)
Hmmm...
The closing couplet seems just a bit weak,
but the rest of it is pretty darned good.
alycewilson
Apr. 23rd, 2011 12:13 am (UTC)
Thanks. I was running into a bit of a time crunch by the time I posted it. If I think of a way to strengthen it, I can actually revise the submission until midnight tonight.
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alycewilson
Apr. 23rd, 2011 08:54 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I was thinking about the fact that Shakespearean sonnets often tend to be love poems, so I thought I'd write a love poem to my baby. I started by just free writing about the different things I loved about him, and then I found it fit naturally into this progression of his skills.
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