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msstacy13
May. 13th, 2011 12:59 pm (UTC)
Hmmm... it seems a bit mundane until it reaches the conclusion.
Then it suddenly jumps from C- to A+
:)
alycewilson
May. 13th, 2011 01:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I was under a time deadline with this one, since the assignment had to be submitted by midnight last night, and I didn't get a chance to start it until 11:15! But thank you: I liked the ending, too (and agree it was a slow start). Maybe I'll revisit this idea and explore it more for another poem. Or revise this one. Who knows?

BTW, he's having fun right now looking in a mirror on his pay station. Very cute!
angelic_mystic
May. 13th, 2011 01:46 pm (UTC)
I like that. The picture is really cute.
alycewilson
May. 13th, 2011 03:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you! The picture was a great one, taken while he was swinging for the first time.
baxaphobia
May. 13th, 2011 01:49 pm (UTC)
Awww, Very sweet!
alycewilson
May. 13th, 2011 03:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks! He inspires me.
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